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There once was a girl known as "the storyteller" to everyone but herself.
She wrote and wrote, told story after story, but each word ended up on a shelf.
She wrote stories and riddles, nonsense and rhymes,
But criticized all her works many a time.
"It makes no sense!" she cried, "It all looks wrong!"
"The setting's not set, and the intro's too long!"
But everyone else marveled at the works that she made
In the light of her versions, the originals would fade.
The storyteller's stories were one of a kind,
Not quite status quo, but no one would mind.
Her words flowed like rivers, each plot line unique
She wove her stories threaded with mystique.
All could see this. Alas, all but she
But that, I suppose, is what intrigues me.
Some of the greatest people this world has known
Never saw the pure talent that was their own.
So let the storyteller write and tell stories at her pace,
And she'll become one of the best across all time and space.
Cheesy, I guess, but true just the same~!
(if you let me keep rhyming I'm going to start sounding lame)

If explanation is needed involving "versions and originals" and/or "time and space," I have two words. Doctor Who. And another three words. JUMPING OFF BUILDINGS. =3=
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MidnaLinkForever Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
First thing that came to mind
"Goodbye, Raggedy Man."
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kirameki87 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WAaaaah thats mean. Don't make me re-live that! =3=

...butyeahisupposeitmakessense
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MidnaLinkForever Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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iceaxe22 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thats really good! :D
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Mageofcats Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Woah. This is really freaking true, and I like how it's all rhyme-schemey.

Good job!




I know a lot of people like that girl.
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kirameki87 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! And yeah, there do seem to be a lot of people who think like that...
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Mageofcats Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Any time.

^_^

Ps: not cheesy at all. This was best told in rhyme!
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